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Please excuse me for this unexpected letter expressing the eagerness of my son / daughter 陳大文 (Chan Tai-Man) for the education offered by the XXXX Primary School.
My son / daughter and I are very much impressed by the education offered by your school which stresses a balanced and all-rounded development of one’s potential. The school is so renowned for its academic and extra-curricular activities standing that all parents would like to have their children educated in such a sounding environment. I attribute the success solely to the devotion and enthusiasms by the Principal and every members of the school. The XXXX Primary School really makes a difference.
I am sure my son / daughter will obtain great benefit if he / she is with the XXXX Primary School. And follows his / her own initiative in learning and being diligent. Though he / she might not have done as well as others, he / she is likely to show great progress if some form of enlightenment is given by someone who is a real educationalist. Moreover, my son / daughter is humble, pure and hardworking. He / She love reading, drawing and playing piano. He / She also joins the chapel master in school and obtains some performances.
I believe that my son / daughter could receive a high-quality education, the best development and happy school life if he / she could be educated in your school.
My sincere hope that Principal could give us support. For more understanding of my son / daughter, copies of his / her school reports, certificates and testimonials are enclosed for your consideration. We look forward to hearing from you soon.
Thanks for your kind attention.
Regards,
Yours truly,
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Please excuse me for this unexpected letter expressing the eagerness of mine and my son / daughter for the education offered by the XXXX Primary School.
My son / daughter and I are very much impressed by the education offered by your school which stresses a balanced and all-rounded development of one’s potential. The school is so renowned for its academic and extra-curricular activities standing that all parents would like to have their children educated in such a sounding environment. I attribute the success solely to the devotion and enthusiasms by the Principal and every members of the school. The XXXX Primary School really makes a difference.
I am sure my son / daughter will obtain great benefit if he / she is with the XXXX Primary School. And follows his / her own initiative in learning and being diligent. Though he / she might not have done as well as others, he / she is likely to show great progress if some form of enlightenment is given by someone who is a real educationalist. Moreover, my son / daughter started on playing the piano at last year and has attained the stage II level. His / her talent in this area is likely to be developed further as the XXXX Primary Scholl has an excellent reputation for music.
I would be most grateful if my son / daughter could be given an interview with the Principal so that you may obtain a more comprehensive understanding of my son / daughter. Copies of my son / daughter’s school reports, certificates and testimonials are enclosed for your consideration. Should anything be missing, I can be reached at 12345678 for clarification.
Thanks for your kind attention.
Regards,
Yours truly,
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Mr. / Ms XXXX
The Principal
XXXX Primary School
Dear Mr. / Ms XXXX,
Highly impressed by the whole-person education and the brilliant teachers of your school, which have been nurturing students of both academic and moral excellence in the past. Therefore, on behalf of my son / daughter XXX, we would like to apply for the admission to Primary One.
Educated in XXXX Kindergarten, XXXX performs especially well in Chinese and English, satisfactorily in other subjects. He / She has a bright character, a strong curiosity, and a love for reading and music. At the school's talent show this year, he / she even received an award in the Piano / Violin performance.
In order to balance XXXX’s development in all aspects, I often accompany him / her to participate in many family activities organized by our community organizations to broaden his / her horizon, to foster his / her knowledge in our society, and to encourage his / her independent thinking and expression of ideas.
I wish the best for our child's development and earnestly hope that XXXX could receive a high-quality education from your school. Meanwhile, he / she could enjoy a happy school life.
Enclosed are a completed application form and copies of the relevant documents for your review. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours sincerely,
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Attachment: 1 application form, 1 copy of the academic report and 1 self-address envelope.
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Mr. / Miss XXXX
The Principal
XXXX Primary School
The Principal
XXXX Primary School
Dear Mr. / Miss XXXX,
We are very grateful and appreciative of you spending precious time in reading this unexpected letter of ours. The main purpose of this letter is to take this opportunity to introduce our son / daughter to you.
Our son / daughter, XXXX has applied to your school for P1 admission next year during the Discretionary Phase. We are highly impressed by your School Motto – to be humble, mutual respect, hardworking, positive philosophy, independent thinking. Similarly, the team of brilliant teachers who have nurtured the students towards academic and moral excellence has greatly motivated us. As such, we are very keen for him / her to become a student of your esteemed school. We have selected your school for the Discretionary Phase (Application Form No. XXX, number XXX), and have already decided that if we should fail, we will definitely try again in the Central Allocation Phase and subsequently thereafter XXXX is currently studying in the whole day upper class of XXXX Kindergarten. He / She enjoys reading and music very much. Our son / daughter is honest, independent and has a bright character, with a strong sense of curiosity which we encourage. He / She has won school awards for School Competition of English Chirography, Chinese Chirography and other competitions in the school.
In order to balance XXXX’s developments, he / she attends Piano Course in Tom Lee Music and English Phonics Course in Bauhinia Association. We also often bring him / her to family activities organized by the community organizations, the school and our family in order to broaden his / her horizon and to encourage his / her independent thinking.
We would be appreciated if we could be given an interview (anytime) with the Principal for further clarification and we sure that the Principal could obtain a more comprehensive understanding of our son / daughter.
Enclosed, please find a copy of the application form, curriculum vitae and copies of awards, certificates, academic reports and photos for your consideration,
Thank you for your kind attention.
Yours sincerely,
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XXXX
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It gives me great honour to write to you. We met last month at your School Open Day, and at the time, my son / daughter, XXXX and I were impressed by the virtues your pupils presented and the academic excellence they maintained. I also agree with your adoption of the cross-curriculum methodology to broaden pupils' horizon. Such nourishing environment has confirmed our decision to apply to your school.
XXXX shares the same view with full enthusiasm. He / She actively joins an array of enlightening courses that can equip him / her with essential knowledge, thus build up him / her confidence. I believe this initiative is the main reason that your pupils are always outstanding. More encouragingly, my husband and I find my son / daughter has potent language ability, especially in reading English literature. This trait is exceptionally suited to your school's emphasis on language training.
We also recognize that your school is one of the few pioneers in establishing a parents' association, in which teachers coordinate seasonable activities to foster a harmonious relationship between the school board and parents. Their commitment and consideration again makes us feel that we can count on your school to nurture wholesome development of our children.
We are now more convinced than ever that (school name) is our ultimate choice. In the meantime, I am enclosing XXXX's achievement portfolio, which explains further why him / her qualities would make a good addition to your school. Thank you for letting us know that primary school life can be that fruitful and enjoyable.
Yours faithfully,
(Parent's name)
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